Comments on: voice

By: rads

rads — Thu, 05 Mar 2009 01:26:07 +0000

Thank you! :)

I read yours, yes, they do qualify am sure. I had no idea about this type until I read it at TOP!

By: trauma queen

trauma queen — Wed, 04 Mar 2009 19:43:02 +0000

bee-yoo-teef-ull!!
i blv i have written some semi-anaphoric poems myself – tho the repetition is not entirely consistent
http://totaltrauma.blogspot.com/2007/07/get-lost….
http://totaltrauma.blogspot.com/2006/09/single-no...

By: rads

rads — Sun, 01 Mar 2009 03:29:03 +0000

Thanks Linda! I wouldn't let the reader forget her voice now would I? ;-)

By: Linda Jacobs

Linda Jacobs — Sun, 01 Mar 2009 02:05:35 +0000

this is a perfect example of repetition used to its best! Love it!

By: rads

rads — Fri, 27 Feb 2009 20:33:05 +0000

That's a sweet way of putting it. Yep, a prayer it is :-)

By: Melanie-bd

Melanie-bd — Fri, 27 Feb 2009 17:16:54 +0000

This is wonderful. It reads like a prayer for the road of life. Well done.

love-bd

By: rads

rads — Fri, 27 Feb 2009 11:48:24 +0000

LOL! Aw come now, I thought she covered them all, not just whine! :-)

By: sweet talking guy

sweet talking guy — Fri, 27 Feb 2009 11:22:45 +0000

Phew, love the progression here, love the bit when you killed her off, and her voice was frozen in mid scream! I bet the silence sounded so loud after all her whining! (TGI fable!)

By: rads

rads — Fri, 27 Feb 2009 02:32:04 +0000

Yeah, I imagined it to too. Thanks for commenting! :)

By: Tumblewords

Tumblewords — Fri, 27 Feb 2009 02:03:18 +0000

Incredible voice – rings true…