10
Sep

stay (audio)

   Posted by: rads   in fable

Add Comment

As always, am trying different things that catch my fancy, and no one including me knows how long any of these fancies last. But enjoy I have learnt, for as long as they last.

A repost of an older post, this time with audio.

Stay_fable

Stay.

Stay
Just a bit longer, stay
I want to kiss you once more

The night as a witness to our desire
Hush,
Close your eyes,
Can you feel me?
Like I did just hours ago

In the silence of my darkness
Your breath as my beacon
I caress you with my fingertips

Stay
Just a bit longer
Make love to me once more

Brushing wavy tendrils away
Your stubble grazes my chin
A passion on a sway
Yet again
Your lips cradled in mine

In the crescendo of our heartbeats
Your voice as my refuge
I echo you with my eyes

Stay
Just a bit longer, stay
I want to kiss you once more

The night’s growing old
Dawn’s stealing quietly through
My spine feels a cold
Hold on, don’t let go

In the warmth of this raging amour
My dream as my anchor
I shut my eyes tight

As you must know
I wake with the dawn,
Poof!
There you go.

Stay
Just a bit longer
Make love to me once more

Tags:

Add Comment
This entry was posted on Thursday, September 10th, 2009 at 5:44 pm and is filed under fable. You can follow any responses to this entry through the RSS 2.0 feed. You can leave a response, or trackback from your own site.

This website uses IntenseDebate comments, but they are not currently loaded because either your browser doesn't support JavaScript, or they didn't load fast enough.

13 comments so far

The Mute Oracle
 1 

Well, I hope this fancy lasts. It was great to hear you reading the poem.

September 10th, 2009 at 10:20 pm
rads
 2 

Thanks MuteO. Appreciate the feedback. Was a little antsy.

September 11th, 2009 at 2:37 am
Gagan
 3 

Nice. Specially for people like me who can't read poems but can hear them for as long as possible
Keep it up. :)

September 11th, 2009 at 4:06 am
naren
 4 

Superb. And superbly narrated!

September 11th, 2009 at 1:11 pm
smita
 5 

Beautiful!!

-Smita

September 11th, 2009 at 2:54 pm
rads
 6 

Naren, Smita : Thank you :)

September 12th, 2009 at 12:43 pm
rads
 7 

I used to be that way with poems as a child. Am glad that poetry warmed up to me as I grew.
Thanks :)

September 12th, 2009 at 12:44 pm
A&N
 8 

I think its done well :)

September 12th, 2009 at 8:56 pm
rads
 9 

heh, like you'd say anything else? :)

September 12th, 2009 at 9:22 pm
A&N
 10 

I would. Through some other medium, perhaps!

September 13th, 2009 at 8:45 pm
sid
 11 

nice verses.

a li'l feeling wud have lifted the recitation too.

gud stuff!

September 19th, 2009 at 1:27 am
Nikki
 12 

Beautiful! And you reciting the poem made it only better. Just proves my belief that emotions are better conveyed through voice than words over distance. Hope to see more of this soon :)

September 22nd, 2009 at 11:05 pm
rads
 13 

Thanks Nikki, been awhile since I've seen you.
Am trying this out, not sure how long or what I'd do, but it's been a fun experience so far :)

September 23rd, 2009 at 8:49 pm

Leave a reply

Name (*)
Mail (will not be published) (*)
URI
Comment
Back to top